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Imran Yusuf
It was good to see a work in progress. On the whole , you did a great job, and the good bits were really good . Some of the references were quite niche (like the US ones) and seem to lose the audience. The rubbish joke about the female James Bond lost most of the audience, and didn't fit with the rest of the show, which had some clever build-up....but that was really crap and obvious and about as funny as an old white bloke tutting about women drivers- I think you are probably better than that! Also, the one about women nagging. They were just really boring, as it's not any different to boring old man chat, and women hear that every day.....I wonder if you might have felt it was edgy because you don't hear it every day (?) but trust me, most women do. The gag about Croydon was hilarious, the multicultural stuff was great, the self-deprecation stuff was great. I felt that the stuff about the UK being amazing was a bit weak (it's not, and it feels really bad right now) but I see what you were trying to do. All in all, thanks...and congratulations on a show that's really shaping up!
Imran Yusuf